This is a belated response to another challenge on One Stop Poetry.
"Belated," I say because I should have had this up yesterday, but poetry takes a certain frame of mind, and I am not always up to it, but I have been intrigued by the Tanka form for a while. At last, I have some.
First, I am cautious
Better to compose In the mind before I place The words on the tongue For that which is said once Cannot be ever be unsaid
Then, I know that I can't be TOO careful
Better to say it Than endure sullen silence I'd rather risk Your disagreement with me Than suffer dishonesty
Finally, I am just my generally insouciant self
I am too happy To ever be a good poet And I do not care It's better to be silly Than to be nothing at all
I have some more, but they are purer forms, love letters in the true Tanka tradition. They don't fit with these. I shall save them for another day.
5 comments:
Oh. They read great as a group. Wonderful.
Thanks, kolembo. I just visited your blog. Your work is stunning.
very true. the words cannot be unsaid...
and the guy who invents the unsend button is the newest demi-god...
and i gave you an award on my JADIP blog!
Bruce
Bruce Johnson JADIP
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stupid stuff I see and hear
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Hi Bruce,
I probably should have unsent my comment on your blog. Damn it. But thanks for the award!
no worries man! they will defend themselves, if they need to.
never appologize for having an opinion.
i left a comment today for the restaurant managers rant and sorta dissed princess di...
i thought about it and then said, well, it is just my oipinion, i am not stating that it is factual...
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